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Wednesday, November 14, 2007 - 3:24amSanction this postReply
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Introducing humor to this is a great way to work around the depressive ideas contained.

At the end, I don't see the Hillarys, I see the Gates, Edisons, Jobs, etc.  Those are the images we should see. Not the freaking Clintons! Ick!

Ending on the positive might be better.

Still good, though.


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Wednesday, November 14, 2007 - 5:22pmSanction this postReply
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Great job! (As always.)
At the end, I don't see the Hillarys, I see the Gates, Edisons, Jobs, etc.  Those are the images we should see. Not the freaking Clintons! Ick!
TSI: See, the thing is that the screen goes black when he mentions the men of the mind, because they are not there: they are missing.  It is like when an author says that the man with tattered clothes reached deep in his pocket for his quarters and found a new hole and feared that he had lost the coins. The author does not actually have to say, "The man was poor."  So, too, with this.  The screen goes black because there are no men of the mind to show.


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Thursday, November 15, 2007 - 3:20amSanction this postReply
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I just think it would be more effective to show the producers, maybe on a split screen, along with the takers. 
I think people would "get it" better that way.


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Sunday, March 8, 2009 - 7:01amSanction this postReply
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The Congressman who says that this Congress has pursued a policy of hear no evil see no evil...

That was Rahm Emanuel, now the White House Chief of Staff.


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Friday, March 13, 2009 - 10:54amSanction this postReply
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Yeah- he's getting cut next edition :)

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Saturday, March 14, 2009 - 1:33pmSanction this postReply
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What Teresa said.

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