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Wednesday, June 6, 2007 - 11:31amSanction this postReply
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Heed not the hazy veil of mysticism

Those shades of gray serve only to deceive

But wondrous colors shining through the prism

Of truth show hues of brilliance to conceive.

To follow faith alone I'll never ask

Of you, I'll never plead for mystery

Just understand with clarity each task,

Each word, this evidence for you to see

Authentic love and marriage of true minds

Shall flourish gloriously through the years

And when sensations shallow fail, we'll find

True understanding overcomes all fears.

Eternal love will never take its leave

Hold no blind faith, it’s truth you must believe


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Wednesday, June 6, 2007 - 1:00pmSanction this postReply
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would be better if the last word (believe) be removed and say, t'accede [to accede] be used...
[for to believe is to take on faith]

or  change last line to -

"Hold no blind faith - to truth you must accede."

(Edited by robert malcom on 6/06, 1:03pm)


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Wednesday, June 6, 2007 - 1:11pmSanction this postReply
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Good suggestion!

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