| | Marty, I like the "The music of this star-born soul, Rich in celestial harmony" lines especially.
But be careful. Some of the those who post on other websites will abhor as anti-life, anti-mind, etc. etc. the fact that you employ poetry that uses the "G" word rather than launching into a long, philosophical denunciation of all gods and mystical conceptions. Can't have beauty getting in the way of rage.
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