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Wednesday, August 31, 2005 - 11:10pmSanction this postReply
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Never posted a poem here, or anywhere for that matter. Thought I would give it a go!

a lighthouse stands
on my lonely shore
a guarding barrack (protecting)

i like to go as far as the eye sees
i once knew you'd follow me but no
now i go alone
except from the light (fading)

walking down a summer road
scent of jasmine waters my eyes
and in this scene we drift away
toward crescent moons
while yesterday still lights our room
and from the kitchen wafts scents of
histories not yet written
looking down onto cobblestones
bound by clay
eaten by the salty air
lighthouse burns


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Thursday, September 1, 2005 - 1:45amSanction this postReply
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Donald, this poem tears me apart (was it supposed to?). I immediately took "light house" to mean soul (Greek for: consciousness). Then, in the middle, you make the protagonist go "[away] from the light" (note: I say "away"-- because you said: fading).

Perhaps it's the way I view everything in the world -- but I need to understand the thing -- before appreciating it, even in the slightest. Is this a poem about dying? Please, please don't tell me that it is that which I see that it as (and if I see it that way -- then it IS that way).

Ed

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Thursday, September 1, 2005 - 7:30pmSanction this postReply
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Yes, it tore me up just typing it up again!
I wrote this in my angstier teen years, but still touched my "soul" even as I typed it up. Set your fears aside, it has absolutely nothing to do with death or dying!

1. The loneliness of being "different", or being told that what you are or believe is wrong.
Think of the guarding barrack as a symbol of reason.

2. Straying from that loneliness by compromising ones values. It alludes to a companion coming along.

3. The lighthouse, consciousness, or "rock", still within sight, even though the protagonist has been led astray from his values. They are still visible and can be a guiding light for a safe return.

4. What life should be: walks with your soulmate, memories triggered by random scents in the air, nights filled with great cuisine, songs, fun; things to be held onto and cherished as histories (memories). Looking forward to, and loving life so much, that the histories are there, although not yet written.

5. The continuity of life. I just now realized that the "looking down onto cobblestones" line could be misread as a suicidal intention, rather it is an admiration of timelessness. This is a fairly ambigous piece, I guess that is why it is one of my favorites. It definitely contains many levels.

Lighhouse burns could be a mantra for "life is eternal, life is beautiful"


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Thursday, September 1, 2005 - 8:05pmSanction this postReply
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 ... It's wonderful then!

Ed


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