Hi Jeanine,
I enjoyed reading your poem, and I enjoyed the flow though I don't know much about poetry.
What is interesting is your soul's self disclosure, through laying yourself out there through art.
There is something that reminds me of Wagner’s Ring, in the sense that the end comes full circle without, the gold ends up back where it was originally found…and I can’t help but sense theme of pointlessness…and a longing for some age of moral giants.
History is a very special lens at which to look at humanity…we only see the important brilliant people, for good or bad, and that is an exalted standard for mortals.
Michael
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