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Tuesday, December 17, 2002 - 10:19amSanction this postReply
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That was gorgeous. Nice work.

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Tuesday, February 4, 2003 - 8:58pmSanction this postReply
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This is a beautiful poem Kay. I too remember Los Angeles, but I don't quite recall the pink panties :-) Your poetry has a lightness that makes me smile, but you seem to have a whole lot of things going in your mind.

I especially enjoyed "and the quieting steps of your breath when I crept into you." That sent shivers up and down my body! Whew!

Please keep writing, it is very much enjoyed!

Anthony

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Saturday, August 2, 2003 - 6:17pmSanction this postReply
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Wonderful! It's as if you took the essence of music and put it into words!

Pianoman

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